It seems like i am on a limerick spree....
And this is my latest one....
" Comes year end and its exam time,
I don't give a hoot, nor do I give a dime.
All I care,
Is what i wear;
'Cause above all I want my limerick to rhyme!!"
I feel this ones way better than the last....I am getting better at this....
Cheers.. :)
1 comment:
well, its better yea.
next time, try to pace it to one limerick.
one that i always use to compare pace and rhythm is
"there once was a lady from niger
who went for a ride on a tiger
they returned from the ride
with the lady inside
and a smile on the face of a tiger "
:)
u see how the rhythm fill perfectly. and also check syllables
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