Love is butterflies in the stomach when u fisrt see her...
Love is being incoherent in the head when u first try to talk to her...
Love is feeling alive just cause she exists...
Love is being happy just cause u are alive...
Love is having a bad day cause someone didnt come...
Love is thinking about her and going to sleep...
Love is dreaming about her all night...
Love is thinking about her when u wake up...
Love is not being able to any, any fault in her...
Love is being aware of her presence in the room the moment she enters...
Love is feeling a high for hours afterwards the first touch...
Love is feeling wretched since u havent talked to her for days...
Love is feeling reborned after she talked to you after months...
Love is feeling helpless when the brain wins over the heart...
Love is feeling crushed when u cant do anything about it...
Love is still dreaming about her after years...
Love is not being able to get over her... ever...
Love is wanting to leave a city just cause she sms'd from some place else in the world...
Love is waiting, waiting, waiting... not because theres no other option but because u dont want to choose any other option... cause there can be no other option... even when what u are waiting for is not clear...
4 comments:
I always knew u cud write well, but this cums as a surprise !!!! Newys its a beautiful expression of love, great going .....
well, call me a cynic, but thats obsession! Not Love. think about it.
"Love is thinking about her and going to sleep...
Love is dreaming about her all night..."
Why? If i am getting context right, the person in love in the poem, seems to dream of her only when she calls.
seriously, don't think of this as being dead inside, but i think some of it is really maudlin!
"Love is not being able to any, any fault in her..."
I disagree, love is loving her despite her flaws, not blinding yourself from them.
That been said, i like the last line, "Love is waiting, waiting, waiting... not because theres no other option but because u dont want to choose any other option... "
That my friend makes full sense to me.
you can add, love is wanting to grow old with someone.
love is wanting that someone to be witness to your existence, when no one else cares.
love is reciprocating everything you feel for her.
u know...love is nothing but a kind of obsession only.... and yeah u are right....it shud have been loving her inspite of her flaws....
at last you speak from the bottom of your heart!!!
hey, dont let the brains win over your heart...
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